Feel the blood,
Run down my cheeks,
As I fade away today,
Taste the drops,
Of tears unshed,
How does it feel?
He feels so faint,
As he waits for,
God to take him away.
He looks so cool,
stands so strong,
But deep inside,
Everything is wrong,
But nobody cares at all,
They don't even know!
This is really good. I sometimes write things like this when I have the time and inspiration!
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Thanks for commenting. Hannah can you please follow me? I am going to do the same with your blog I will follow it. Goodnight
DeleteOk!!!! Would love to see more. :)
DeleteFollowed your blog. Gonna get some sleep now. Thank you for enjoying my writings.
DeleteHannah why did you stop following me? I wrote a awesome poem a few minutes I thought you'd like to read.
DeleteSorry my blogger keeps doing that. I follow blogs but when I go back I'm not following
DeleteOk.... Thanks for letting me know.
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